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Ignore life.

Ignore the pain.

Ignore the hurt.

Ignore everything that makes you feel broken.

its easy. its hard. its natural.

When you've been hurt a million times
you get afraid,
scared,
and then the thought comes to youre head.
i wont let anybody hurt me again.
so you hide.
you ignore life.
you pretend tha you dont care
but you do.
You thought that it's gonna be easier that way.
You thought wrong.
There's a point in that life where you find yourself so deep
so deep in the dark where no light is at sight.
a point where youre hurting yourself,
feeling sorry for yourself,
feeling hopeless,
useless,
a point where youve given up to everything that's worth living for.
a point to life itself.
so when you do ignore everything that's real
start second guessing
because when you do it
its gonna take a lifetime to get back to who you really are.



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FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 6, 2011 at 7:12 am
On the fifth line, you should have used it's instaed of its and same goes with the last line... And then the thought caome to your head... You should have used apostrophes (') in some lines and you sohuld have capitalized "i"s...

Anyway, I like the meaning of this poem and your word selection too.

:)))
 
lostandconfused said...
May 12, 2011 at 10:50 am
I love this poem... it describes me going through all of that everyday.
 
HoneyBear said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 8:29 pm
This Was The Best Poem I've Read So Far(: It Connects With Mee<3
 
Bookworm7 said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 4:42 pm
This poem's concept to me is so true. I really liked it. Check out my work. :)
 
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