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February 24, 2011
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Bodies without boundaries
Boundaries without restrictions
Restrictions without curfew
Curfew without night
Night without darkness
Darkness without sound
Sound without music
Music without soul
Soul without purpose
Purpose without meaning
Meaning without cause
Cause without affect
Affect without scars
Scars without bruises
Bruises without wounds
Wounds without words
Words without letters
Letters without numbers
Numbers without calculations
Calculations without statistics
Statistics without facts
Facts without knowledge
Knowledge without brains
Brains without beauty
Beauty without bodies
Bodies without boundaries

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TTTeeSS said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 9:18 am
This was really good! I love this style and may have to try it myself.
Ariya said...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 4:17 pm
It's really interesting and memorable. I did get confused and I had to read it twice to get it (but that's probably just me) good job!
Brooke M. said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 6:16 pm
It was definitely interesting, Had a good message.
Princess MOMO said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 3:02 pm
Cause and Effect, you mean? I think it is good but it seems a little bit ranting... 
StrangeJade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 4:15 pm
Wow! So good! :D
Dan_B said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 2:17 pm
I like it. I think you meant cause and effect, though.
Basketball23 said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 5:05 pm
I love this!!!  Especially the way it all wrapped around to the beginning again!!!  That's so awesome!!! <3
Camii said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 1:09 pm
I really liked it! but i just thought that something was missing though i don't know what was it ,, but it's good :)
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