Messy Dark Brown Hair

February 21, 2011
White as the glistening snow, her skin
Softly glows like the whiteness
Of the eloquence of a dove’s skin
Her blue beautiful eyes gazing
At my messy dark brown hair.

She is like a majestic radiant angel,
Her gorgeous golden, smooth, and silky hair
Symbolizing to me, all hope, all peace and all
Everlasting warmth of her love, beauty, and kindness. How
Her skin is soft, as soft as her evermore-undying beauty.

That beauty which can give me refuge and comfort.
She makes my hopelessness of my broken spirit go away, go far away
To a distant place out in this lonely universe .
And for now, me, feeling that I have no worry in this cold world
And I am free like that white dove flying out in that big blue sky.

And In my mind and in my heart and me my spirit
I will remember that day when
The most beautiful girl in the whole wide world
Looked right into my messy dark brown hair.

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PerfectMGymnast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 12:15 am
beautiful! i liked this a lot!! the lies got a bit confusing because it cut off into the next line but other than that it was really descriptive and i could picture it perfectly in my mind!! :)
emma0314 replied...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 7:25 pm
precious! great description--it's beautiful!
beach replied...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 9:21 pm
Just Amazing! AMazing, it is so perfect!
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