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Silence floods the room until it seems the world is empty,
the words replaying in our minds
how could it really be true?
How could the world still be in motion?
How could life still be flowing as steady as a river?
Even with the truth suddenly pouring out
and all of the secrets uncovering
and now finally we realize the flood is now of tears.
The silence has vanished into thin air
only replaced by the cries of mourn and love



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SweetbeanieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 8:40 pm:
LOVE!  So amazing!  Good job!!!
 
l.iney replied...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 5:56 am :
Thank you so much!
 
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Mermaidmissy said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 9:57 am:
Omg! I so loved the poem a whole lot. It made me cry and my rating for your poem is 5 out of 5 just to let you know. :)
 
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MarenaFleury said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 8:13 am:
Beautiful.
 
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l.iney said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 6:57 pm:
thanks for reading
 
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TheSweetNerd said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 2:56 pm:
Great poem, it's really descriptive and intense. Your imagery is very impressive, I wouldn't mind reading more of your stuff.
 
l.iney replied...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 7:47 pm :
thanks please do read more i have like 22 things on the site
 
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Mermaidmissy said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 2:56 pm:
I really like your poem a whole lot. It even made me cry some just by reading it. But it was really good, and I hope you will write some more poems soon. :)
 
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