Fleeting Smiles

February 5, 2011
By Anonymous

He’s the meaniest, most obnoxious, and point blank rude person.
And that-
Is incredibly magnetic.

Why do I want to just-
Just be around him.
Why do I want the guy who can be so mean.
Maybe it’s because that glimmer-
That little tiny chance
That fleeting smile
Or camoflaged complement

In worth it’s weight in gold
When its from him.
When it’s from him,
I want to jump and shake and SCREAM

Gosh I love him
I really do.

And I want him to realize
That he
As much as he doesn’t see it
That he wants me too.

Since when do MEN know what they want?

Not even men; but people.
Everyone around us

I make him laugh
He makes me glow
He makes me erupt
Love and happiness and excitement
Just goes flying every which way
When he looks at me with those
Eyes of his.

I could just die.
Really and truly I could.
I could stare for hours.

He’s amazing.
I don’t know anyone else even remotely like him.
He makes me crazy as all get out.


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This article has 2 comments.

on Mar. 15 2011 at 9:05 pm
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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l love this! i feel exactly the same way with this guy. sigh, do i know! haha but great job!

JuStMe.DeZZi said...
on Mar. 10 2011 at 4:47 pm
JuStMe.DeZZi, NA, Other
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Ha ha, I know how you feel, my first love was my worst enemy - and strangely his eyes were blue too... Great poem, very emotional  and chaotic -  I love it.


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