Daddy Loves

February 4, 2011
By Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Daddy, daddy sit me on your knee.
Together we will always be,
Closest of friends,
From beginning to end.
You always knew what was best,
While you guided me through trials and tests.
You were always there
Never ashamed to be my teddy bear.
Looking up at the stars,
You're holding me in your arms,
I'm wrapped up so tight,
I could not escape with all my might.
You're my protector; you're my shield,
From life's playing field.
I want to thank you from my heart,
I believe that nothing could ever tear us apart.


The author's comments:
Keep holding onto the ones you love because you never know when your going to need the love you hold.

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on Mar. 17 2011 at 10:18 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Omg I'm so sorry about your cusin on what happen. Ya of course I'll look at your poems I promise. Thanks!! :)

Kiba1 GOLD said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 5:51 pm
Kiba1 GOLD, Cripple Creek C.O, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
\"Its Not Too Late Its Never too Late.\" \" \'I Cant\' Is Never True\" \"Ill Be The First To Say that Now Im O.K\" \"You Tried To Bring me Down, And You Epicly Failed.\" "Judge me, And I'll Prove you Wrong. Say I'm Nothing? Watch Me Soar."

if you check out my poem, Wings, i wrote it about my Cousin, Dominick, whom committed suicide... it an ok poem.

on Mar. 15 2011 at 9:54 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Ok I'm going to look at your poems now. :)

l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 13 2011 at 6:51 pm
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky

um i have a lot actually most are free verse and about death/loss

on Mar. 13 2011 at 5:44 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Thank you so much, I'm so happy you really like my poem a lot. Um I was wondering can you tell me what topic your poem is under because I can't seem to find it and I'm having a hard time. So Sorry!!! :)

l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 12 2011 at 7:00 am
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky

this is so amazing and the comment you put about it is so true because you really never know whats coming next


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