on dark and gloomy nights

March 2, 2011

On dark and gloomy nights there is a fight
Or a war has happened or taking place.

The lightning covers it up
And the thunder sounds it out.

Helpless people die
While little children cry.

The war will be over soon
But that is just a lie.

So lie down in your bed and dream of happy thoughts
So goodnight my children and the night will be all right.


The author's comments:
this is my love for war and im sad beacuse my father is in war i rote this when he was in iraq

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on Dec. 29 2011 at 12:34 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

thumbs up..... make it ur own way!

on Dec. 28 2011 at 4:12 pm
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER, ROME GA, Georgia
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ya thnks i do wish to go to war like him sooner or later

on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:18 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
13 articles 3 photos 113 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

I understand ur love towards your father......

COol one!


on Dec. 21 2011 at 12:52 am
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER, ROME GA, Georgia
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thnk u :) that means alot to me

 


on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:30 pm
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

I'm sorry your dad is in Iraq. Writting is good though, it helps let out all the stuff you are holding in. Keep writing dude, this is good!

on Apr. 4 2011 at 7:59 am
theheart_thatisbroken SILVER, ROME GA, Georgia
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plz comment




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