on dark and gloomy nights

March 2, 2011
On dark and gloomy nights there is a fight
Or a war has happened or taking place.

The lightning covers it up
And the thunder sounds it out.

Helpless people die
While little children cry.

The war will be over soon
But that is just a lie.

So lie down in your bed and dream of happy thoughts
So goodnight my children and the night will be all right.

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Muzee3 said...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 1:18 am

I understand ur love towards your father......

COol one!

POET_MAN16 replied...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 4:12 pm
ya thnks i do wish to go to war like him sooner or later
Muzee3 replied...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 12:34 am
thumbs up..... make it ur own way!
Brokenness_is_Beautiful said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 12:30 pm
I'm sorry your dad is in Iraq. Writting is good though, it helps let out all the stuff you are holding in. Keep writing dude, this is good!
POET_MAN16 replied...
Dec. 21, 2011 at 12:52 am

thnk u :) that means alot to me


POET_MAN16 said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 7:59 am
plz comment
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