Hero Dad

February 3, 2011
By Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments

You are my hero, Dad
You're my secure foundation.
When I think of you, I'm filed with love
And fond appreciation.

You make me feel protected;
I'm sheltered by your care.
You're always my true friend; and Dad,
When I need you, you're always there.

You have a place of honor
Deep within my heart.
You're been my superhero, Dad,
Right from the very start.


The author's comments:
The poem that I written will want to make people feel safe with there dads and warm inside. So here's to all the girls out there, never let your daddy's go cause you never know when your going to need him the most.

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on Jan. 18 2012 at 9:23 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Hey I was just wondering if any of your poems been on the web site yet? I'm still looking forward to reading them. Well I hope they are up soon! :)

on Nov. 28 2011 at 6:49 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Hi I was wondering when are your poems going to be on the site soon? I hope they get there soon. I put some new poems on the site if you want to check them out if you want to, any ways I thats what I wanted to say. Thanks! :)

on Oct. 17 2011 at 11:45 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Hey I was wondering when you stuff is going to pop up on the computer yet, let know soon k. Oh ya I put new poems on the site I hope you check them out and tell me what you think k. I also put a book on there to just in case. Thanks!! :)

on Sep. 27 2011 at 11:00 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
You can check out all of my other peoms if you like. Thanks for rating my peom it means a lot to me. Do you have any stuff I can read or rate for you.

on Apr. 29 2011 at 9:31 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
I would love to look at your work, and ill try my best this weekend and see ok, i promise. Thank you!! :) 

on Mar. 17 2011 at 10:12 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Great I'm going to rate it right now and tell you what I think ok. Thanks!! :)

on Mar. 17 2011 at 10:10 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Thank you so much. I'll look for your stuff as well. :)

on Mar. 16 2011 at 3:34 pm
forsaken BRONZE, Mission Viejo, California
3 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and speak your opinions,
because the people who matter, dont mind
and
the people who mind, dont matter.

non of my poems have been posted yet but an opinion on free speech has.

on Mar. 13 2011 at 5:39 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Well when your work gets on the computer soon and I hope it does I promise you I will rate it and give you my reply on it some day. I'll pray really hard that you'll get on the computer. But keep up the good work tho. :)

Saysh PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 13 2011 at 12:09 am
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow

This made me smile. :) great poem!

on Mar. 12 2011 at 8:48 pm
BitterSweet1993 SILVER, Bronx, New York
5 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is only a dirty trick played on us to achieve continuation of the species. ~W. Somerset Maugham, A Writer's Notebook, 1949

Never a problem when it's a beautiful piece.

on Mar. 12 2011 at 6:55 pm
ebj.2014 PLATINUM, St. John, Washington
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I like this a lot, and I completely agree--I love my dad! Would you mind looking at some of my work? :)

on Mar. 11 2011 at 4:56 pm
forsaken BRONZE, Mission Viejo, California
3 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and speak your opinions,
because the people who matter, dont mind
and
the people who mind, dont matter.

Im the same way. its bothers me when i dont get any feed back (positive or negative). i cant wait till my work gets approved.

on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:45 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Im so happy you really like it a lot. It really makes me happy when people read my poems and tell me what they think. Thank you so much!! :)

on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:44 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Thank you so much for reading my poem it really means a whole lot to me. Thanks!! :)

on Mar. 10 2011 at 8:20 am
BitterSweet1993 SILVER, Bronx, New York
5 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is only a dirty trick played on us to achieve continuation of the species. ~W. Somerset Maugham, A Writer's Notebook, 1949

Beautiful. <3

on Mar. 9 2011 at 6:04 pm
forsaken BRONZE, Mission Viejo, California
3 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and speak your opinions,
because the people who matter, dont mind
and
the people who mind, dont matter.

This peom is sweet and kind. I think it is great to write about positive, up lifting topics because what you focus on expands.




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