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Dream

February 3, 2011
By Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Life was like a moonless night
Shrouded in the stars
Beauty can be such a fright
But now you're in my arms,

You are my life now
Can't you see?
I'd cross oceans
I'd swim seas
To be with you
That's enough for me,

Your face is like a poison
Intoxicating me
How can we live forever?
When our love can never be.


The author's comments:
I really love this poem because it brings what you really want to hear.

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on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:25 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
I will comment on your poem for sure and tell you on what I think for sure. thank you so much for liking my poem and I hope it's not a a bad thing about your life. I think your life is great and very peacful and beautiful at the same time. :)

on Mar. 11 2011 at 12:46 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

That was great! Keep up the good work!!:)

on Mar. 10 2011 at 8:48 pm
Bren_Bren BRONZE, Memphis, Tennessee
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing you will fall for anything

I love it!! I like how you used some similes in the too...... can you read my poem and tell me what you think?? I just started Lolz

Angel8 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 10 2011 at 1:03 pm
Angel8 BRONZE, Mendenhall, Mississippi
1 article 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sha Sha Shake it... Dont break it... It to ya mama nine months to make it!

This poem is really good!:)

on Mar. 10 2011 at 12:01 pm
derya inan SILVER, New York
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments
I really like it! I love how it is set up it sounds so good together , I't really inspired me it basically describes my whole life.

on Mar. 9 2011 at 7:35 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

I really liked this poem...Good job.(: Would you mind telling me what you think of a couple of mine???(:

Lahari GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2011 at 5:23 pm
Lahari GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
19 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\"Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. Today is a gift. That\\\\\\\'s why its called the present.\\\\\\\"
— Eleanor Roosevelt

\\\\\\\"When life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then sit back and watch as the world wonders how you did it.\\\\\\\'

NiCe! I really like it! except for the ver tense agreement!

 


on Mar. 9 2011 at 1:54 pm
whisperingofdawn GOLD, Colorado City, Arizona
17 articles 12 photos 87 comments
cute piece :)