Father Daughter Dance Song

February 2, 2011
By Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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My daddy was my hero
For my very youngest years;
Daddy kept me safe and happy,
And he chased away my fears.
I watched in awe and wonder
At each manly thing he did;
Oh, I looked up to my daddy,
When I was a little kid.

My dad was still my hero,
As the years passed, one by one.
He taught important lessons,
And he took some time for fun.
He was my firm foundation;
On my dad I did depend;
He was always there for me,
My dad, my guide, my friend.

My father is my hero,
Now that I am fully-grown.
I love him and respect him,
The best man I've ever known.
I knew when I would marry
That my husband had to be
A great man, just like my father,
Dad, my hero you'll always be.


The author's comments:
This poem that I written was about my dad and that when I write I think on all the stuff that we shared that really touched my heart. I hope other people really like my poem and ill have more poems I'm going to put on the computer so others can in-joy my work.

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on Feb. 23 2012 at 9:35 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Sure I'm going to check your work right now and let you know what I think ok, and can you take a look at my book please and let me know what you think, I'm going to get it published soon. Thanks! :)

on Feb. 23 2012 at 9:32 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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If you would like to read some more of poems and my book as well, your more than welcome too. Thanks! :)

on Feb. 6 2012 at 7:18 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Yes, I'm going to check out your work tomorrow and let you know what I think for sure. Dont worry k. Oh ya I hope you like my other work as well. Thanks! :)

on Jan. 24 2012 at 9:27 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Hey do you have anything on your stuff yet? I would so love to read them soon. Thanks! :)

on Jan. 24 2012 at 9:26 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Have you got anything on your stuff yet? I would so love to read them and soon to. :)

on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:58 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Hey thank you so much for liking my poem, and I hope you like the others as well. And I'll keep on looking for some more of your stuff to. Thank You! :)

on Dec. 6 2011 at 2:18 pm
CaseyDawn BRONZE, Princeton, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You're only as good as you make yourself out to be.

This is really good!:) Keep writing poetry! You have a real talent!

on Sep. 30 2011 at 12:18 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Do you have anything you want me to read and vote for. I be happy to if you like. Oh and see if you like my book so far, I'm going to publish it soon.

on Sep. 22 2011 at 9:21 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Thank you so much fo reading my poem that made me so happy to hear. I have other poems to if you want to read some more as well. Thank You!! :)

on Sep. 21 2011 at 8:45 pm
LiederMadchen ELITE, Aurora, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
For, I could not love thee, Dear, so much,
Loved I not honour more.
-- Richard Lovelace, quoted often by Baroness Emmuska Orczy in The Scarlet Pimpernel

This is wonderful! My feelings for my dad have never changed, either, so this poem is perfect. :)

on Apr. 29 2011 at 9:29 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Thank you so much!! And yes i do feel the same about my dad every day of my life. He's my hero and my superman to me. :) 

on Mar. 17 2011 at 10:05 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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I'm so sorry to hear about your dad. I hope you feel better soon. And i'll pray hard so he won't be like that any more. And i'm so happy you really like my poem. Thank You!! :)

Kiba1 GOLD said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 5:46 pm
Kiba1 GOLD, Cripple Creek C.O, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
\"Its Not Too Late Its Never too Late.\" \" \'I Cant\' Is Never True\" \"Ill Be The First To Say that Now Im O.K\" \"You Tried To Bring me Down, And You Epicly Failed.\" "Judge me, And I'll Prove you Wrong. Say I'm Nothing? Watch Me Soar."

I realy enjoyed it... i never want to be like my father, he is a druggie, and a pothead... and and alchie... and a murderer... will you check out some of my stuff?

 


on Mar. 14 2011 at 8:27 pm
kelbyrom BRONZE, Hemet, California
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this is amazing!!! i love it!

JuStMe.DeZZi said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 9:29 am
JuStMe.DeZZi, NA, Other
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You seem to write about your dad alot, which is a great thing to have, great poem, I love it. Its really cool how you move through the years but still feel the same.

l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 12 2011 at 6:58 am
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky

amazing as all of your work is and the message is something i can completely relate to my dad is my hero.

ps i have a few more thigns posted check em' out


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on Mar. 11 2011 at 4:32 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
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you're welcome!

on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:37 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Thank you so much for reading my poem. And I hope you may like the others maybe. Thanks!!! :)

on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:36 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Thank you so much for reading my poem it really means a whole lot to me. :)

on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:34 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Yes, I will give you my answer for sure and tell you what I think fo sure. Thank you so much for liking my poem it really means the world to me a whole. :)


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