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A Dawn

February 9, 2011
By aspiringdreamer SILVER, Carlsbad, California
aspiringdreamer SILVER, Carlsbad, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars."


The gentle whisper of a propitious wind
The dewy mist shimmers in a warm glow
A new day has dawned, penetrating darkness
Omitting the evil malevolence of the past
Leave yesterday's struggles behind
Bask in the comfort of granted forgiveness
Capacious of promise, abundant with hope
A new start, a fresh beginning
Live, love, learn, but never forget-
Nature's alms, God's gift...dawn.


The author's comments:
I love the idea of a fresh start, and dawn is beautiful.

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on Aug. 16 2011 at 3:24 pm
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

I agree! this poem's language and words go wonderfully together i especially like the first 4 lines...:) "the propituous wind..." you did really good with this!!!:)

on Jul. 30 2011 at 12:30 pm
purplequeen BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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Wow, it is really vivid! I love it!