A Dawn

The gentle whisper of a propitious wind
The dewy mist shimmers in a warm glow
A new day has dawned, penetrating darkness
Omitting the evil malevolence of the past
Leave yesterday's struggles behind
Bask in the comfort of granted forgiveness
Capacious of promise, abundant with hope
A new start, a fresh beginning
Live, love, learn, but never forget-
Nature's alms, God's gift...dawn.





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purplequeen said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 12:30 pm
Wow, it is really vivid! I love it!
 
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Aug. 16, 2011 at 3:24 pm
I agree! this poem's language and words go wonderfully together i especially like the first 4 lines...:) "the propituous wind..." you did really good with this!!!:)
 
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