French Class

February 9, 2011
We have French class together,
I stare at the clock,
Just so I can see you out of the corner of my eye,
I want to talk to you randomly,
I'd say,
Tu es fantastique,
J'adore toi,
Est-que tu adores moi, aussi?
But, I fear you'd say, non,
Because you can't even see me,
And I highly doubt you care.

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Alon_Freevoice said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:59 am
I don't understand the Franch part of the poem but I understand how you feel :))) 
HannSawyer15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 31, 2011 at 5:35 pm
Dude... somethings up with French classes because I like a dude in my french class too! And I feel the exact same way... aghh. Anyway! :) Great poem!
Raytheraym replied...
May 31, 2011 at 7:05 pm
Thanks! :)
itskaylee. said...
May 29, 2011 at 9:58 am
I feel the same way about a guy in my French class! like beach said, I loved that you used the French language. (: nice work!
Raytheraym replied...
May 29, 2011 at 11:20 am
Thanks! :)
beach said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 1:49 pm
That was good! i liked how u incorparated the french language. the last line could have been a little more emotional, but i really liked this poem!!! going to check out more of your work now!!!!!!!
Raytheraym replied...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 3:07 pm
Thank you yet again! ;)
HighOnEverythingButLove said...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 5:11 am
Could use alittle more emotion but it was pretty good.
Raytheraym replied...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 3:46 pm
Um, thanks.
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