French Class

February 9, 2011
By Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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We have French class together,
I stare at the clock,
Just so I can see you out of the corner of my eye,
I want to talk to you randomly,
I'd say,
Tu es fantastique,
J'adore toi,
Est-que tu adores moi, aussi?
But, I fear you'd say, non,
Because you can't even see me,
And I highly doubt you care.

The author's comments:
Stupid unrequited love.

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on Aug. 1 2011 at 12:59 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

I don't understand the Franch part of the poem but I understand how you feel :))) 

on May. 31 2011 at 7:05 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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Thanks! :)

on May. 31 2011 at 5:35 pm
HannSawyer15 BRONZE, North Brunswick, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"I say... lets speak it. Lets fight it. Lets write it. There's nothing to hold on to if it's already gone."

Dude... somethings up with French classes because I like a dude in my french class too! And I feel the exact same way... aghh. Anyway! :) Great poem!

on May. 29 2011 at 11:20 am
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thanks! :)

on May. 29 2011 at 9:58 am
itskaylee. BRONZE, Pawleys Island, South Carolina
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I feel the same way about a guy in my French class! like beach said, I loved that you used the French language. (: nice work!

on Mar. 13 2011 at 3:07 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Thank you yet again! ;)

on Mar. 13 2011 at 1:49 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

That was good! i liked how u incorparated the french language. the last line could have been a little more emotional, but i really liked this poem!!! going to check out more of your work now!!!!!!!

on Mar. 9 2011 at 3:46 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Um, thanks.

on Mar. 9 2011 at 5:11 am
Cammie45874 SILVER, Ohio City, Ohio
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Could use alittle more emotion but it was pretty good.




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