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No Longer

February 16, 2011
By msprincess SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
msprincess SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
build a bridge and get over it


No longer a part of me stings me it bugs me thinking about it just keeps me thinking what Can I do to step my game up or do I need to step it up? Maybe its them that needs to step up their game . Im perfectly fine no need to better myslef for someone's needs. Im fine the way I am to make them happy not me . I will find the one that don't judge me and that happy with my looks and everything else. That treats me like a princess that I am not a devil . Hate to be treated like I'm nothing , I'm something special that's why GOD put me on this earth. To breathe and love my life and somebody else to find that one that loves me back in return not to be messed with than ignored I'm find the one that I don't need to stress about and have days that will be a blast. Keep me happy all day long not the one that stabs me in the back and keep me worried all day long not going to have someone that's going to worry be all day long and make me not me.



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DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2012 at 2:06 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

"I'm something special that's why GOD put me on this earth." I really liked that line. I really liked your poem it was really good and you had a a lot of emotion in it. Great job!!! Now my only suggestion is that their are a few parts where format is a tad bit weird looking. Other than that awesome job!!!

on Mar. 16 2011 at 4:29 pm
msprincess SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
build a bridge and get over it

thanks for checking them out and thaks  for lettting me know that I appreciate yuor feeback

on Mar. 15 2011 at 7:39 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Hi, I decided to check out your other poems8) This poem was really nice. It had a lot of feeling in it, and I could tell it was based on a real life experience. I hope you continue writing, I would love to hear more from you!