Summer light

January 27, 2011
By hadleey BRONZE, Coquitlam Bc, Other
hadleey BRONZE, Coquitlam Bc, Other
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Star white
Skimmed from the breathy, salty
surface of the ocean.
Tangents of warm yellow
filter through my window.
I can feel the sigh
of the whole world
being alive.
The breeze holds every drumbeat
every particle of voice and laughter.
But today
I am inside.



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on Mar. 5 2011 at 3:00 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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Short and simple! Nice poem! Beautiful imagary. I like "breathy, salty surface of the ocean" and "tangents of warm yellow". And I enjoyed how you describe everything feeling alive.




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