January 27, 2011
By hadleey BRONZE, Coquitlam Bc, Other
hadleey BRONZE, Coquitlam Bc, Other
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The air is big here.
Other places you don't notice the air
but here,
it's like the ocean is the sky.
And I feel so fiery raw.
I am writing to break myself,
To put grooves in my shell.
It feels like nobody in the world can connect
least of all me
and I am ready to claw someone open
with neediness.
I've learned that loving someone with love
is completely different
then spilling over them
because they are like a part of yourself that has fallen away.
Beautiful Soul
you should catch a glimpse of yourself
in between moments.
I want to feel beautiful too.

The author's comments:
This is sort of a journal poem

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on Mar. 5 2011 at 1:30 pm
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth

love your work, grate post :)

if you dont mind cheking out some of my stuff to that whod be grate !


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