My Promise of Forever

February 16, 2011
By CandaceRenee BRONZE, Smiths, Alabama
CandaceRenee BRONZE, Smiths, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Our love is like the wind. I can't see it, but I sure can feel it." -A Walk to Remember

Not a love not or an extravagant gift.
I give you my heart.
It is a deep passionate love-filled part of me.
It promises forever, like the wedding ring given by two souls in love.
It will make you feel as though you can touch the sky if you want to, like a child with a dream of reaching the moon.
It will make other loves feel uncompareable.
I am trying to be honest.
Not a box of chocolate or a piece of gold.
I give you my heart.
Its beauty will make everyone stop and stare in amazement,
as we are,
for as long as we are.
Take it.
It's every piece of me, offering to stay yours forever,
if you like.
Our kisses will be as sweet as hersheys.
Its scent will cling to you,
cling to your lips.

The author's comments:
This poem meant alot to me. It was about my first love. Even though we are over, it still meant alot to me, and it was how I felt about him.

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