behind that closed door

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sitting in the attic
afraid to open the door
fighting and bloodshed
i can hear it
frightened and fearful i am
behind that closed door

i wonder if i will ever get my chance, one chance to make things right
will they let me
sitting alone wondering how to accomplish
to make things right
behind that closed door

finally building up the courage
to make a move
to make a change
because no longer am i sitting
behind that closed door





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EmilyGram said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 1:28 am
Interesting!  Good job at capturing such a traumatic experience in verse!
 
nisirocks replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 1:51 pm
Thank you :)
 
youngpilot said...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 5:28 pm

wow! i always seem to pick music to fit the mood of what i am writing! as always, i am not into poetry, but ur the single exception. if you write enough poetry you could basically make a poetry book.

the only thing, as i mentioned before to you, just fix the CAPITALIZATION, like the 'I's and every line should be capitlized:) other than that its really good:)

freeeaky picture too!

 
nisirocks replied...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 5:40 pm
Coolz thanksss :) i wish i culda edit this
 
youngpilot replied...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 6:31 pm
i know! its soo annoying! i would do that for HAM and the short story i wrote
 
nisirocks replied...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 8:28 pm
Yea its realli annoyinggggg :(
 
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