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behind that closed door

February 14, 2011
By anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
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anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
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All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe
~"Paper is more patient than people,"~Anne Frank
"Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark."~Anisa Nasir

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sitting in the attic
afraid to open the door
fighting and bloodshed
i can hear it
frightened and fearful i am
behind that closed door

i wonder if i will ever get my chance, one chance to make things right
will they let me
sitting alone wondering how to accomplish
to make things right
behind that closed door

finally building up the courage
to make a move
to make a change
because no longer am i sitting
behind that closed door

© Monica L., St. George, UT

The author's comments:
This is something i extracted from my imagination. I sat in my room listening to a song that was depressing, but in most times the depressing songs have the strongest meanings. Anyways i was thinking about child abuse and i came up with this story that i wanted to be put into a poetic format. I tried hard and i hope that you will like the result.
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anisanasir_11 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 1:51 pm
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
23 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe
~"Paper is more patient than people,"~Anne Frank
"Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark."~Anisa Nasir

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Thank you :)
EmilyGram BRONZE said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 1:28 am
EmilyGram BRONZE, Simpsonville, South Carolina
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"And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt."
Sylvia Plath

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Interesting!  Good job at capturing such a traumatic experience in verse!
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 8:28 pm
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
23 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe
~"Paper is more patient than people,"~Anne Frank
"Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark."~Anisa Nasir

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Yea its realli annoyinggggg :(
DaughteroftheTrumpet BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 6:31 pm
DaughteroftheTrumpet BRONZE, East Aurora, New York
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Washington Irving once said “There is sacredness in tears. They are not the mark of weakness, but of power. They are messengers of overwhelming grief and of unspeakable love.”

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i know! its soo annoying! i would do that for HAM and the short story i wrote
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 5:40 pm
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
23 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe
~"Paper is more patient than people,"~Anne Frank
"Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark."~Anisa Nasir

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Coolz thanksss :) i wish i culda edit this
DaughteroftheTrumpet BRONZE said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 5:28 pm
DaughteroftheTrumpet BRONZE, East Aurora, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Washington Irving once said “There is sacredness in tears. They are not the mark of weakness, but of power. They are messengers of overwhelming grief and of unspeakable love.”

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wow! i always seem to pick music to fit the mood of what i am writing! as always, i am not into poetry, but ur the single exception. if you write enough poetry you could basically make a poetry book.

the only thing, as i mentioned before to you, just fix the CAPITALIZATION, like the 'I's and every line should be capitlized:) other than that its really good:)

freeeaky picture too!