Walking Alone, Still

February 8, 2011
By casielynnxoxo SILVER, Pasadena, Maryland
casielynnxoxo SILVER, Pasadena, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"You'll never fully understand someone, unless you are them."


I'm right there when you need me,
I've been here all along,
just hiding in the shadows,
the place where I belong.

And when that girl came 'round,
I watched our friendship die.
But when she broke your heart,
I stood still by your side.

One day you crosses the boundary,
into the world I've been hoping for.
and kissed me with such passion,
I just couldn't ask for more.

Too bad it changed our friendship,
even though I held myself back.
For you it was just too much,
there was something that I lacked.

So now you left me sulking,
to walk our streets alone.
Though without our shadows kissing,
I'm left to face the unknown.

And I know right now I'm angry,
you've left me with such hurt.
I fear I cannot take it,
it was better when we'd flirt.

But I'll always be right here,
I've been right here all along.
Just hiding in the shadows,
the place where I belong.


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on Sep. 10 2011 at 6:37 pm
casielynnxoxo SILVER, Pasadena, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"You'll never fully understand someone, unless you are them."

Thank you :)

on Sep. 10 2011 at 2:49 pm
MaggieClaude SILVER, Randolph, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
The most wasted of all days is one without laughter.

I like  it....a whole lot.

on Aug. 23 2011 at 4:29 pm
casielynnxoxo SILVER, Pasadena, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You'll never fully understand someone, unless you are them."

Yeah, that's what I've been working on. My poems need more artistic elements, lol.

on Aug. 22 2011 at 10:53 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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It's a great beginning! The meaning is there, the flow's good, but I think you just need to go a little deeper and add some metaphors and whatnot. It was good though! (:

on Mar. 4 2011 at 8:00 pm
casielynnxoxo SILVER, Pasadena, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"You'll never fully understand someone, unless you are them."

*I meant to say crossed


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