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Forever

February 15, 2011

Your eyes
Forever innocent and pure
Your hands
Firm but forever gentle
Your hair
Silky and smooth
Your lips
So sweet and tasty
Oh how I love you
You are my everything
I will always be yours
Forever



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malakai SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 10:47 pm
malakai SILVER, Washoe Valley, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
never give up even when there is no point

very good its sweet

on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:39 pm
soaring_creativity DIAMOND, Wooster, Ohio
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Thank you so much :)

on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:36 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Among Glass Now I Walk is a really good one of hers, and if you want to read some more of mcnwritingsoul's work, just try copy and pasting her screen name into advanced search on Teenink.

on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:33 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

So pretty and simple!!! I love love poems, especially the really simple ones, they manage to so beautifully reach the core of caring. <3

on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:19 pm
soaring_creativity DIAMOND, Wooster, Ohio
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It's about someone special ♥

on Mar. 3 2011 at 9:07 am
love this poem!!  who is it about...

on Mar. 2 2011 at 11:50 am
SecrecyGirl17 GOLD, La Monte, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a storm, so bring your umbrella."

short simple and to the point great job =)

on Mar. 2 2011 at 9:42 am
Leah Plath BRONZE, State Center, Iowa
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Love is a beautiful thing to write about, good work.

M.Kimmi BRONZE said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 7:34 pm
M.Kimmi BRONZE, New York, New York
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sure, give me a title name

M.Kimmi BRONZE said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 7:33 pm
M.Kimmi BRONZE, New York, New York
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So DIRECT AND FULL FO PASSION!!!!!! THUMBS UP!!!!!!!!! :D

on Mar. 1 2011 at 3:26 pm
mcnwritingsoul SILVER, Fairfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"They can't scare me, if I scare them first." -Lady Gaga
&
"I remember watching the mascara tears flood the ivories and I thought, "It's OK to be sad." I've been trained to love my darkness." -Lady Gaga

Great image-implied!! luv it!! it had little power, though. i felt empty and still hungry after i read it. but very very good!! can someone pllzzzzz comment on my poetry!!!!! im desperate for honest feedback!!!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 12:19 pm
TheyCallMeSpanky SILVER, Foutain Inn, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Truth is everyone's going to hurt you, you've just gotta learn which ones are worth suffering for." -Bob Marley

This is really good.

KiTTYKAT said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 12:01 pm
i love your poem it so full of love and passion