Your Lies

February 12, 2011
Clouds form in my mind
Don't know where I am
Trying to push through the fog to find me

What happened to me?
What did you do?
It was all your lies

The lies that destroy
The lies that draw back
The lies that damage

What you did to me I will undo
I no longer believe you foolishness
There's a part of me, and another
Putting my self back together





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BrielleM-JustAnotherOwl- said...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 9:14 am
Once again, great job! I like the last stanza best. (: It makes you hope everything will be okay! It's a sad experience, but it makes a great poem!! (Oh, and I'm sorry that I didn't comment on ALL your poems- you have A LOT and I just don't have the time today!)
 
Beachgirl1 said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 12:20 pm
same thing happened to me... bad experience= great poem!
 
shop4life said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 4:42 pm
I like it. What made you write it? :)
 
Carlos-Concussion replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 5:14 pm
Backstabbed my a once good friend.
 
shop4life replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 5:30 pm
aw, I'm sorry to hear that. . I know how that feels!
 
Carlos-Concussion replied...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 7:19 am
I got over it made new friends so its all good now
 
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