Hope and Trees

Trees grow leaves in spring
In summer their leaves stay green
When fall comes the leaves start to fade, leaves change color and fall off
Winter brings dead trees
How could they ever bud again?
But then comes spring and there are the leaves
Trees are like hope it starts bright and alive then dims like death
But always springs back up





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Kaleighgirl97 said...
May 20, 2011 at 7:42 pm
carlos, this is amazing! keep writing, and try to get the revised version done. cant wait for i!
 
Basketball23 said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 8:15 pm
I really like this.  It's somewhat bland at some points, but overall it's very good.
 
Carlos-Concussion replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 7:12 am
Yeah it's got some flow issues that I'm gonna fix then repost the revised version.
 
Basketball23 replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 2:13 pm
Let me know when you post the revised version.  Overall this was very well written so an improved version will be fantastic!
 
Dominicano_Loco replied...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 8:48 am
There's a good message here. I like it. :)
 
. said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 8:07 pm
Yes, this is a very beautiful poem! Sorry it took me so long to respone, but the my computer has been acting very odd.
 
Beachgirl1 said...
Mar. 12, 2011 at 12:24 pm
this one is good as well, an intresting topic, keep writing!
 
shop4life said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 4:45 pm
I like this one 2. :) good job!
 
Carlos-Concussion replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 5:22 pm
:D thanks you
 
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