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Hope and Trees

February 12, 2011
By Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Impossible is just an excuse for people who have given up.- My older brother


Trees grow leaves in spring
In summer their leaves stay green
When fall comes the leaves start to fade, leaves change color and fall off
Winter brings dead trees
How could they ever bud again?
But then comes spring and there are the leaves
Trees are like hope it starts bright and alive then dims like death
But always springs back up



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on May. 20 2011 at 7:42 pm
Kaleighgirl97 SILVER, Lawson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"When the rich wage war its the poor who die."














- Jean-Paul Sartre.

carlos, this is amazing! keep writing, and try to get the revised version done. cant wait for i!

on Mar. 23 2011 at 8:48 am
Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!"/"I'm goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow."

There's a good message here. I like it. :)

on Mar. 22 2011 at 2:13 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Let me know when you post the revised version.  Overall this was very well written so an improved version will be fantastic!

on Mar. 22 2011 at 7:12 am
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
51 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Impossible is just an excuse for people who have given up.- My older brother

Yeah it's got some flow issues that I'm gonna fix then repost the revised version.

on Mar. 21 2011 at 8:15 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 487 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

I really like this.  It's somewhat bland at some points, but overall it's very good.

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on Mar. 12 2011 at 8:07 pm
Yes, this is a very beautiful poem! Sorry it took me so long to respone, but the my computer has been acting very odd.

on Mar. 12 2011 at 12:24 pm
Beachgirl1 PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"If You Don't Fight Back, You've Already Lost."
"Don't suppress Laughter, it goes to your thighs."

this one is good as well, an intresting topic, keep writing!

on Mar. 1 2011 at 5:22 pm
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
51 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Impossible is just an excuse for people who have given up.- My older brother

:D thanks you

shop4life said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 4:45 pm
shop4life, Concord, New Hampshire
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I like this one 2. :) good job!