Her Eyes

February 3, 2011
By Money.Man. SILVER, Brownsville, Oregon
Money.Man. SILVER, Brownsville, Oregon
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We run, not because we think it is doing us good, but because we enjoy it and cannot help ourselves...The more restricted our society and work become, the more necessary it will be to find some outlet for this craving for freedom. No one can say, 'You must not run faster than this, or hump higher than that.' The human spirit is indomitable."Sir Roger Bannister


Her eyes are as brown as the dirt below me,
Her lips are as red as a vibrant cherry,
Her hair flows gently down her face,
She’s the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen,
Her body is perfect,
She's the girl for me.


The author's comments:
The reason I wrote this is because It was what I felt at the time.

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Hover BRONZE said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 6:10 pm
Hover BRONZE, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Sophistication isn't what you wear or who you know
Or pushing people down to get you where you wanna go
They didn't teach you that in prep school, so it's up to me,
But no amount of vintage dresses gives you dignity.
~Taylor Swift
*Defy Gravity!*

So cute! You should totally tell her.  I know if some guy told me that, I would be touched.

It's short, yet has meaning packed into every word. Very good!


on Mar. 29 2011 at 4:16 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Well you sound like a really sweet kid and I think that certain girl would be really lucky to have you.  I know I'm here to comment on your literature and not give you dating advice, but if I were you I would definitely give her the poem.

on Mar. 29 2011 at 1:06 pm
Money.Man. SILVER, Brownsville, Oregon
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We run, not because we think it is doing us good, but because we enjoy it and cannot help ourselves...The more restricted our society and work become, the more necessary it will be to find some outlet for this craving for freedom. No one can say, 'You must not run faster than this, or hump higher than that.' The human spirit is indomitable."Sir Roger Bannister

Yeah your kind of right that might be taken as an insult! I worte this article for a girl that a really like but I never had the guts to give it to her.

on Mar. 18 2011 at 6:58 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
8 articles 13 photos 488 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

Awww this is so sweet!!!  If you told a girl this I know they'd melt and fall for you.  Only one thing...but don't take this the wrong way because it sounds amazing in the poem!!!...but you may not want to tell that certain girl that her eyes are the color of dirt.

on Feb. 23 2011 at 2:51 pm
Money.Man. SILVER, Brownsville, Oregon
9 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We run, not because we think it is doing us good, but because we enjoy it and cannot help ourselves...The more restricted our society and work become, the more necessary it will be to find some outlet for this craving for freedom. No one can say, 'You must not run faster than this, or hump higher than that.' The human spirit is indomitable."Sir Roger Bannister

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