February 8, 2011
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I dream…
Of a ribbon of exquisite stars twirling up to the luminescent moon.
The stars seem mysterious, alluring as I gaze in wonder.
The shining cord of beauty reaching up to the heavens sparkles, shimmers, invites me irresistibly.
I step onto the shining, light-thread and the stars scatter, fly away, like startled lightning bugs.
I glide forward, my scream of shock torn from my lips.
I’m falling, away, away, away.
Past the taunting, winking thread and the laughing moon, past the final snatch of heartbreaking laughter as the world hurtles away at a breakneck pace.
I’m falling, falling, falling.

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poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 5:41 pm

poisonivy: ..............................

what can i say about a poem that leaves you speechless?

poisonivy said...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 11:24 am

This poem is no short of talent :D


poisonivy said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 10:13 pm

This poem will have to go on the poem wall of....


ivy chivey said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 9:57 pm

5 Stars :D

And there is no doubt about it :D

poisonivy said...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 9:29 pm
Cordillia Smith said...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 9:27 pm

There is only word to describe this:

WOW :)

Angela said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 11:14 pm
It is a VERY beautiful poem :D i haven't read many poems in my entire lifetime.. but i really like this one :)
Anne Shirley said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 11:05 pm

I have never seen a more talented poem writer than you :D 

Well done!

Davido said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 10:48 pm
Due to my lack of brain capacity, I fail to completely comprehend this poem.  But it is very nice :)
shades_of_gray64 replied...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 4:18 pm
Uhhhhhh thanks david? Though I have no idea how you found me on here? 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 10:32 pm

I LOVE it :D

I wish I could have a talent like yours in writing poetry :D

Those words take me into a whole new world :D

shades_of_gray64 replied...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 4:17 pm

THANKS IVY :D I just write from my heart.. however I feel at the time, even if it's just a dream like this one. 


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