Estes Park, Colorado

February 3, 2011
By Jacob.D.Poettker GOLD, Waterloo, Illinois
Jacob.D.Poettker GOLD, Waterloo, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The Bible will keep you from sin. Sin will keep you from the Bible." D.L. Moody
"Of these three remain: faith, hope and love, but the greatest of these, is love." 1st Corrinthians 13:13


Estes Park. Where the giant ball of flame warms the morning in the mountains.
The temperature, not hot, not cold.
Where the mountains hold up the sun like a boy holds his trophy.
Everything is peaceful.

In the morning
The mountains pull up the sun
In a game of tug-a-war against heaven.
The mountains win till noon
Past noon the angels give the sun to devils.
Who take it to the other side of the earth.
Night forms and the moonlight comes to life.

Colorado.
A peaceful place.
The leaves sway in the wind.
It’s better camping there.


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on Mar. 16 2011 at 3:59 pm
Jacob.D.Poettker GOLD, Waterloo, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The Bible will keep you from sin. Sin will keep you from the Bible." D.L. Moody
"Of these three remain: faith, hope and love, but the greatest of these, is love." 1st Corrinthians 13:13

it was originally supposed to be like that, but thank you for you opinion.

Alia_Tan GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 8:14 pm
Alia_Tan GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I gotta right to sing the blues/
gotta right to moan and sigh/
I gotta right to sit and cry" From "I gotta right to sing the blues" By Louis Armstrong

oooo :) It seems like a story :) i would say though, the first line should be seperated at the period and Where. other wise, nice job!




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