Beautiful

February 3, 2011
By Jacob.D.Poettker GOLD, Waterloo, Illinois
Jacob.D.Poettker GOLD, Waterloo, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The Bible will keep you from sin. Sin will keep you from the Bible." D.L. Moody
"Of these three remain: faith, hope and love, but the greatest of these, is love." 1st Corrinthians 13:13


I always like autumn
Best
The gently falling leaves
The soft chilly winds
Everything beautiful
Just beautiful
From the painted dying leaves
To the smell of the fresh chilled air
Not too hot
Not too cold
To the joy in children’s faces
When they jump in piles of leaves.
To the leave scattered grass
Everything beautiful
Being in touch with the beauty of Fall
The night sky
Beautiful
The dotted stars forming pictures in the sky
Everything beautiful
From the colored leaves falling from trees
To the gentle chilled air
To the constellations in the night sky
Everything Beautiful


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on Mar. 17 2011 at 6:44 pm
Jacob.D.Poettker GOLD, Waterloo, Illinois
16 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Bible will keep you from sin. Sin will keep you from the Bible." D.L. Moody
"Of these three remain: faith, hope and love, but the greatest of these, is love." 1st Corrinthians 13:13

thank you, but the one-word-lines are a part of my writing style, it shows that when you are reading it, there is a pause.

Alia_Tan GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 8:19 pm
Alia_Tan GOLD, Elk Grove, California
15 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I gotta right to sing the blues/
gotta right to moan and sigh/
I gotta right to sit and cry" From "I gotta right to sing the blues" By Louis Armstrong

the one and 2 worded stanzas should not be there in my opinion, and i think at stanzas six , ten, thirteen, and fifthteen should be spaced out. otherwise, nice job :)




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