February 3, 2011
I always like autumn
The gently falling leaves
The soft chilly winds
Everything beautiful
Just beautiful
From the painted dying leaves
To the smell of the fresh chilled air
Not too hot
Not too cold
To the joy in children’s faces
When they jump in piles of leaves.
To the leave scattered grass
Everything beautiful
Being in touch with the beauty of Fall
The night sky
The dotted stars forming pictures in the sky
Everything beautiful
From the colored leaves falling from trees
To the gentle chilled air
To the constellations in the night sky
Everything Beautiful

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Alia_Tan said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 8:19 pm
the one and 2 worded stanzas should not be there in my opinion, and i think at stanzas six , ten, thirteen, and fifthteen should be spaced out. otherwise, nice job :)
JDPoett replied...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 6:44 pm
thank you, but the one-word-lines are a part of my writing style, it shows that when you are reading it, there is a pause.
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