mistake

February 5, 2011
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I did it, its all my fault. I had it all and then pushed it away. You smiled at me and all I heard was his voice say "your not worth it, you never will be" with that I panicked and began my escape. I ran from you, I asked you to stay away. But as much as i asked you to go I didn't want to loose you, and I still don't. But you cant see that, you cant see me. I'm scared inside, I've always been scared to loose what I never have.





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WriterGeek<3 said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 12:57 pm
I love the last line.
 
The_Delusional_Philosopher said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 10:09 am
I can honestly say I hate this poem. It reminds me of many antagonizing feeelings. But it's also one of the best poems Ive  ever seen someone write and I like to feel. So for that, I thank you for stimulating me.
 
Writer4Life_21 said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 10:17 am
I cant quite tell what it is, but this poem has something very special about it. Keep writing! This piece is very expressive and honest, and I reward you on that. thank you for writing this
 
jesse.jay replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 11:41 am
thank you so much
 
jkelsey said...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 7:14 pm
this explains my life on so many levels♥
 
jesse.jay replied...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 7:31 pm
im glad you enjoyed it :D
 
jkelsey replied...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 10:14 pm
did you just write this or was it from an experience of some sort ?
 
jesse.jay replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 11:41 am
i just wrote it
 
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