mistake

February 5, 2011
By jesse.jay PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
jesse.jay PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
life goes on


I did it, its all my fault. I had it all and then pushed it away. You smiled at me and all I heard was his voice say "your not worth it, you never will be" with that I panicked and began my escape. I ran from you, I asked you to stay away. But as much as i asked you to go I didn't want to loose you, and I still don't. But you cant see that, you cant see me. I'm scared inside, I've always been scared to loose what I never have.


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WriterGeek<3 said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 12:57 pm
I love the last line.

on Feb. 21 2011 at 10:09 am
The_Delusional_Philosopher BRONZE, Burbank, California
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"I am a God, for I can create anything from the manifestation of my thoughts"
"Because it's there"

I can honestly say I hate this poem. It reminds me of many antagonizing feeelings. But it's also one of the best poems Ive  ever seen someone write and I like to feel. So for that, I thank you for stimulating me.

on Feb. 20 2011 at 11:41 am
jesse.jay PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
22 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
life goes on

i just wrote it

on Feb. 20 2011 at 11:41 am
jesse.jay PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
22 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
life goes on

thank you so much

on Feb. 20 2011 at 10:17 am
Writer4Life_21 SILVER, No Where, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"If you don't know where your going, you will end up someplace else." - Yogi Bera

I cant quite tell what it is, but this poem has something very special about it. Keep writing! This piece is very expressive and honest, and I reward you on that. thank you for writing this

jkelsey SILVER said...
on Feb. 19 2011 at 10:14 pm
jkelsey SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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Never let anyone make you feel like you don't deserve what you want <3

did you just write this or was it from an experience of some sort ?

on Feb. 19 2011 at 7:31 pm
jesse.jay PLATINUM, Kissimmee, Florida
22 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
life goes on

im glad you enjoyed it :D

jkelsey SILVER said...
on Feb. 19 2011 at 7:14 pm
jkelsey SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never let anyone make you feel like you don't deserve what you want <3

this explains my life on so many levels♥




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