February 4, 2011
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cut my hands on broken glass
trying to climb through your window
but i guess i took too long ‘cause
you’re off to 7-11 to pick up
milk or pop tarts or some other mundane crap
so it looks like i get to bleed slowly to death
on your floor.

sorry about the mess.

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kesher said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 3:30 am
I love the ending, and the way you add the ordinary things in life into the poem, such as 7-11, really brings out the lack of special attention and the normacy of the situation XD
EmiiAngel said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 7:43 pm
great poem ^^ i love how carefree the narrator sounds and the humerous twist at the end ^^ keep it up <33
WinterFairy said...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 4:07 pm
Haha. "Sorry about the mess." Luv it!
jasmin101 said...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 9:37 am

like it a lot


can you check out my poem ( in love dusk) plz

PassionHoldsMySoul said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 9:51 pm



I understand.

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