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Cant you see?

February 4, 2011
By DreaDrop GOLD, Durango, Colorado
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"When I was 5 years old, my mother always told me that happiness was the key to life. When I went to school, they asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down "happy". They told me I didn’t understand the assignment. I told them they didn’t understand life." — John Lennon

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I wish you could see what i have seen
there are things you wouldn't believe
But I have seen so many things
Oh but how do you know that I do not lie?
All you have to do is see the real me underneath
It may seem hard I know
But really its not that hard to see the hidden things or even closed doors
I can see you but can you see me?
I hope so because if someone dose not see I'm scared I will not last
For so many things are bottled up in me.

© Carl N., Little Rock, AR

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