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The End of My World

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I live with your rejection
I loved you regardless
You swore you'd never hurt me
Yet you tore me apart
You told me that you loved me
But then you got bored
I was never enough
Though i gave you everything
You were my world but
I replaced you with my sun as you made my world tumble down



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Mimi15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 3:14 pm:
I completely understand this one! It really sucks when stuff like this happens, but you turned it into such an incredible poem!
 
CoolBreezeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 3:20 am :
I find its more constructive to channel your emotions into a poem instead of revenge.
 
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