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Remember Me When

January 26, 2011
By mackenziemacksey BRONZE, Boyne City, Michigan
mackenziemacksey BRONZE, Boyne City, Michigan
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A star lit gaze blinds your eyes
A whistling kiss floats through the air
And plants itself in your heart
You fall into the shaggy arms of the earth
Head so light you fear it may not be attached
Grass twined through your fingers
The night sky envelops you in its plush quilt
Warm, at ease you drift
Stare into the echo
A foot, an inch…
Silence

The author's comments:
This poem can be interpreted one of two ways, love or death. The reading can imagine the circumstance where you look into the eyes of a significant other, and they blow you a kiss. You are stunned by this instance, and when you come in for a kiss the distance dwindles, and then when you meet for the kiss there is silence. On the other hand, one could read this as a circumstance as death. The gaze being headlights or a person, the whistling kiss a bullet, or collision. The feelings evoked could be the instance before death, and the count down the time until death.

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