The Final Goodbye

January 26, 2011
He said, “Call me when you get home.”
She pulls off as tears stream down her face.


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She heads down a long dark road.
Her foot has a heavy feeling to it.


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So many feelings are building up
As so many thoughts roam through her mind.


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Unconscious of all her surroundings
As her foot continues to press down.


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Her heart is beating out of her chest
As her breathing becomes heavier and heavier.


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But it all just comes to a STOP
Because of a tree that got in her way.





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babygirl576This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 12:53 pm
Wow what a goodbye i feel like crying now
 
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