The Final Goodbye

January 26, 2011
By Ms.Izzie BRONZE, Palmer, Pennsylvania
Ms.Izzie BRONZE, Palmer, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your Attitude determines your altitude."


He said, “Call me when you get home.”
She pulls off as tears stream down her face.


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She heads down a long dark road.
Her foot has a heavy feeling to it.


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So many feelings are building up
As so many thoughts roam through her mind.


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Unconscious of all her surroundings
As her foot continues to press down.


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Her heart is beating out of her chest
As her breathing becomes heavier and heavier.


90…
But it all just comes to a STOP
Because of a tree that got in her way.


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on Nov. 8 2011 at 12:53 pm
babygirl576 PLATINUM, Marion, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You lied, and I cried. You're a jerk, so I was hurt. You're a
deceiver, But I was a believer. Sorry I wasted your time, I guess?

Wow what a goodbye i feel like crying now


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