My other one | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. My other one

My other one

January 30, 2011
By hurricanetom BRONZE, Riverside, New Jersey
More by this author
hurricanetom BRONZE, Riverside, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
is this beginning or ending am i stuck in a dream?
i don't want to know what i think i suppose
out of the light and into this time of demise
and there's a cross on the hill the holy image lies....

View profile

My name is me.
Its what I make It.








Its water
Its rock.
Its soft
Its STRONG.

My name is my experience
My joy
My hopes
My DREAMS

But not just the good

My name embodies my HURT
My LOSS
my fragility....

My name is me.

It was given
But I gave IT its MEANING.
I gave it LIFE

THATS.
MY.
NAME!

The author's comments:
this is the real my name piece. i mis-titled my other poem.
(all caps words are meant for emphasis)
Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
Noise
By Anonymous
Poetry
Doll House Living
By sgrace SILVER
West Chester, Pennsylvania
sgrace SILVER, West Chester, Pennsylvania
5 articles 22 photos 18 comments
View profile
Poetry
I hate splash water on the lack of there-forth
By Anonymous
Poetry
The Moon
By Izzy Hare BRONZE
Camano Island, Washington
Izzy Hare BRONZE, Camano Island, Washington
2 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
unnamed
By Mew13 SILVER
Princeton, New Jersey
Mew13 SILVER, Princeton, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 0 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If there were to be a universal sound depicting peace, I would surly vote for the purr."
(Barbara L. Diamond)

View profile
Poetry
Nothing good comes from Pyromania
By Nelle PLATINUM
Crewkerne, Other
Nelle PLATINUM, Crewkerne, Other
21 articles 10 photos 49 comments
View profile

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 0 comments.