Nothing You Can Do

January 29, 2011
The wounds you leave, they burn so deep,
the words you say, you shouldn't speak,
and everywhere I go I hear your name,
I think I'm going insane,
you think I'm small and weak,
you think you have me beat,
but let me tell you the truth,
I'm stronger than you,
I'm standing on top of the world,
I'm not a scared, little girl,
I'm looking down, I'm standing proud,
and there's nothing you can do now.

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Alon_Freevoice said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 12:58 am
I hate how people insult us when in fact, they are weaker than us. Nice writing skills :)))
SamiLou said...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 2:54 pm
ery empowering :)
SamiLou replied...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 2:55 pm
ah, i ment very :)
Raytheraym replied...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 7:03 pm
Thanks! :)
msprincess said...
May 10, 2011 at 3:56 pm
I liked this poem it rhymed and it has a strong message behind it and seems like your a confident person and you don't let anyone put you down thats a strong thing to have in this world  I really liked this poem though
Raytheraym replied...
May 10, 2011 at 6:03 pm
Thanks! :)
HaleyDRog. said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 1:13 pm
This is an outstanding piece! It is so powerful and yet so short! It takes an incredibly gifted writer to capture something that beautiful in such little words! Wonderful job!
Raytheraym replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 3:45 pm
Thanks! It means a lot! :)
Paige101 replied...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 4:25 pm
This poem stands out to me. It's has a strong message and I absolutely love it. :) Keep up the good work.
Raytheraym replied...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 5:23 pm
Thanks! :)
EmilyGram said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 9:43 pm
powerful!  it's a very relatable poem. good job!
Raytheraym replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 3:39 pm
Thanks! :)
AlyBug said...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 4:18 pm

wow this is so deep and pretty and the emotion is so strong i absolutely LOVE it!!!!


P.S. could you check out my stuff? i got pics too. even tho this is better than the stuff i have on her :)

Raytheraym replied...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 4:27 pm
Thank you! And sure I'll look at your stuff.
AlyBug replied...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 4:31 pm
thanx :)                                                      
HighOnEverythingButLove said...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 5:17 am
Love it. It is very stong and shows alot of emotion,
Raytheraym replied...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 4:15 pm
Thank you!
TwinDemons said...
Mar. 6, 2011 at 1:59 pm

Stand Stong!!!!!!! Love it! ^.^*


Raytheraym replied...
Mar. 6, 2011 at 2:12 pm
Thank you!
annahall12 said...
Feb. 27, 2011 at 2:40 pm
amazing descriptions and impact ! i love the ending.
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