Your Breath

January 29, 2011
By Zachary.S BRONZE, Dryden, New York
Zachary.S BRONZE, Dryden, New York
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They laugh and they scorn
no matter how much they're warned,
of the danger within
a person filled with nothing but sin...

This hatred drives him,
there is no fear inside him...
All he wants is a day of peace,
for that would be such a sweet release...

Yet you continue to deny
what he longs for inside...
So go on, drive in that stake
keep telling yourself its not a mistake...

For he will submit himself to this,
so that no one can dismiss,
his self-driven death
at the hands of your breath.



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on Mar. 14 2011 at 10:29 am
ShelbyMarie93 PLATINUM, Lexington, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"When Death to either shall come -- I pray it be first to me." ~Robert Bridges
or
"Life is not a jump; it's a headfirst dive."
or
"Within you I lose myself; without you I find myself wanting to be lost again."

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╚══`.¸.Isaac H.

Ouch...that's intense...and REALLY well written!




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