You Don't Understand

January 31, 2011
By hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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Losing it all
In spite of all I give
Piece by piece
My sanity falls all around me

Put your hands up
Take your best shot
I don't give a s*** anymore
I've given given all I've got

Show me how little you understand
With every ill-thought-out word you spit
Try and tell me you know who I am
Ignore this poem because you don't understand



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on Jun. 22 2011 at 1:44 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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thanks. i appretiate the feedback. it's god to know that some people understand the way i feel.

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 1:38 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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Completely understand it. I can def feel the emotion, keep writing :)

on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:14 pm
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
59 articles 2 photos 88 comments
thanks man. I just realized why i originally had an "it" at the end it rhymed with spit. oh well

on Feb. 20 2011 at 6:29 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

You put so much emotion into all of your poetry.  This really is a great poem, dude.


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