You Don't Understand

Losing it all
In spite of all I give
Piece by piece
My sanity falls all around me

Put your hands up
Take your best shot
I don't give a s*** anymore
I've given given all I've got

Show me how little you understand
With every ill-thought-out word you spit
Try and tell me you know who I am
Ignore this poem because you don't understand





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CarolynQ said...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 1:38 pm
Completely understand it. I can def feel the emotion, keep writing :)
 
hxcRocker replied...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 1:44 am
thanks. i appretiate the feedback. it's god to know that some people understand the way i feel.
 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 6:29 pm
You put so much emotion into all of your poetry.  This really is a great poem, dude.
 
hxcRocker replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 7:14 pm
thanks man. I just realized why i originally had an "it" at the end it rhymed with spit. oh well
 
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