The Mystery of the night….

January 29, 2011
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I look up at the sky..
There was the moon shining down upon me..
No one understands the pain..
The intensive color of Blood
Flowing down your chest....

The night is what brings us close..
It is what we chose..
You looked in my eyes..
I pulled your hair from your face and said..
“I love you.”

The night brings pain..suffering..and death
The night brings beauty and love..
What should we believe?
Nothing else matters..You are the one……
Without you life means nothing...

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lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 5:27 pm
Ooooh this is spooky! It's really eerie and from after reading this and your comment about the article, you definitely captured the right mood and theme. I read through this twice and the second time I was able to find so much more meaning and really see how you shaped this poem together. I like this! Good job :)
nisirocks replied...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 5:52 pm

Thanks soo muchhh :D 

lilmartz i am about to go read some of your stuff tooo :D

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