The Darkness….

January 29, 2011
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Sitting in the rain..
In the grasp of the darkness.
Lying over you and your tell-tale heart..
Wishing it was a mistake...

You swore to me..
You would never leave.
But there you were..
Murdered in Cold blood.

It took over...
Our long-lived battle lost..
It makes subtle movements across...
Giving up all we had..
But I know I will see you again..

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Jsweetness said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 4:50 pm
nice! i wish i could write poetry like this. it was so deep and kind of mysterious. good job=)
nisirocks replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 5:02 pm

Thanks :) 

Im sure that if u let ur pen flow on ur paper and jot down things and put them together you can come up with a masterpiece :)

youngpilot replied...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 5:38 pm

my cousin was murdered in a car crash, and i can just imagine his girlfriend relating exactly to this because she was with him when he hit the tree, and survived without a scratch.

its really moving, and very strong. as always, amazing job Nisi!

nisirocks replied...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 5:43 pm
Thankss so much :) It really means alot :D
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