Life to Finish

The facts point to an entity,
A finite form of infinity.
A time where time begain.
A day where matter didn't matter.
The gap in space between the stars,
Does God shake the hand of the man in the moon?
A dense world blows my mind.
The expansion to the milky way

Enstien supressing realitivity;
To me is creativity
To compute the things relevent to reality
I am no more a mortal man
Than any man before.

I am as I thought
And I thought as I am.
I love the world,
Yet it scares the hell out of me.
Does that leave just one option?
Am I nothing more than a broken-wing dove?
Is this all there is to see?
Or is there more beyond the sea?

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BlackMoonWhiteSky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 1:52 pm
Whoa. Now that was just amusing. Makes me want to read it over and over for the fun of it.
 
EmityRowe replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 10:02 am
I can't say i really took that as a compliment....
 
BlackMoonWhiteSky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 7:02 pm

No, no. I meant it as a complement. I meant that it sounds good, it has a nice flow and it's fun to hear aloud.

Is that a better way of saying it?

Sorry if my phrasing made what I said sound like an insult, that was not my intent.

 
EmityRowe replied...
Feb. 18, 2011 at 10:01 am
Oh, I understand you now. I misunderstood. And don't be sorry. It's all kool. And also thanks.
 
dolphin13 said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 9:27 pm
Interesting. It has very nice word play and I like the overall idea. Keep writing!
 
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