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Five Reasons

You are as bright as the sun, you shine like ther northern star, you glow like the moon in the night, your eyes are as blue as the sea, your words flow like a river form your lips, these are five out of millions of reasons why i love you





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moodjumper123 said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 5:26 pm
wow this was for your girlfriend. well i bet she loved it your a good writer just the way you are. you dont need to improve
 
Apeggy said...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 6:31 pm

i love this poem,it's very sweet. you wrote in your comments you wanted to improve your work as does every great writer.

i thought it would sound nice if you wrote "you out-shine every golden star" and other than that i have no more comments except it was amazing! :)

 
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