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Five Reasons

February 4, 2011
By mellojello GOLD, Anchroge, Alaska
mellojello GOLD, Anchroge, Alaska
17 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
no words no actions and no vow can show how much i love you


You are as bright as the sun, you shine like ther northern star, you glow like the moon in the night, your eyes are as blue as the sea, your words flow like a river form your lips, these are five out of millions of reasons why i love you


The author's comments:
this is dedicated to my gf but plz leav coments to help me in prove in all my work thank you bye

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on Jul. 5 2011 at 5:26 pm
dance_is_who_i_am BRONZE, Anchorage, Alaska
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wow this was for your girlfriend. well i bet she loved it your a good writer just the way you are. you dont need to improve

Apeggy BRONZE said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 6:31 pm
Apeggy BRONZE, Albion, New York
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A.B.D"A Beautiful Dream"

i love this poem,it's very sweet. you wrote in your comments you wanted to improve your work as does every great writer.

i thought it would sound nice if you wrote "you out-shine every golden star" and other than that i have no more comments except it was amazing! :)