It Has Wings

January 30, 2011
It flits and flies away from you
Because it know you’ll harm it

True – we’ll try

But, you cannot kill it

A bullet


True – we know

Hanging limp

Like a


In the breeze

Dead – your love is
No more

But it is
That is


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Zombies.vs.Robots said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 4:15 pm
I think the style of writing is phenomenal. This piece has a really nice impact because of how it was written. Well done!
AudridLavi replied...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 5:38 pm
Hey it's the author here. Thanks for your comments, this is the first poem i've gotten published. I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reading and commenting on my stories - all sci fi/fantasy. Thanks so much!
The_Delusional_Philosopher said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 9:38 pm
I dont necessarily write in this style, but I appretiate it. On the other hand, I love your idea.
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