It Has Wings

It flits and flies away from you
Because it know you’ll harm it

True – we’ll try


But, you cannot kill it

A bullet

Cannot

True – we know


Hanging limp

Like a

Leaf

In the breeze

Dead – your love is
No more

But it is
Immortal
That is

Life





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Zombies.vs.Robots said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 4:15 pm
I think the style of writing is phenomenal. This piece has a really nice impact because of how it was written. Well done!
 
AudridLavi replied...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 5:38 pm
Hey it's the author here. Thanks for your comments, this is the first poem i've gotten published. I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reading and commenting on my stories - all sci fi/fantasy. Thanks so much!
 
The_Delusional_Philosopher said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 9:38 pm
I dont necessarily write in this style, but I appretiate it. On the other hand, I love your idea.
 
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