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It Has Wings

January 30, 2011
By LieutenantCommanderAudridLavi SILVER, San Jose, California
LieutenantCommanderAudridLavi SILVER, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
The ascent beckons as the descent beckoned.


It flits and flies away from you
Because it know you’ll harm it

True – we’ll try


But, you cannot kill it

A bullet

Cannot

True – we know


Hanging limp

Like a

Leaf

In the breeze

Dead – your love is
No more

But it is
Immortal
That is

Life


The author's comments:
Love sometimes grows, and sometimes seems to die. But it's always there. That's Life.

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AudridLavi said...
on Feb. 15 2011 at 5:38 pm
Hey it's the author here. Thanks for your comments, this is the first poem i've gotten published. I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reading and commenting on my stories - all sci fi/fantasy. Thanks so much!

on Feb. 14 2011 at 4:15 pm
Zombies.vs.Robots GOLD, Lambertville, Michigan
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I think the style of writing is phenomenal. This piece has a really nice impact because of how it was written. Well done!

on Feb. 13 2011 at 9:38 pm
The_Delusional_Philosopher BRONZE, Burbank, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I am a God, for I can create anything from the manifestation of my thoughts"
"Because it's there"

I dont necessarily write in this style, but I appretiate it. On the other hand, I love your idea.