Wrong Falls Right

February 1, 2011
By , Palmdale, CA
Life isnt easy at all
Some steps we take make us fall
But we always seem to make another move
We all have something that we are trying to prove
Sometimes we have a lot to lose
But we are willing to look for clues
Some of us are afraid to be wrong
Some of us think that we are right all along
But we dont notice that we are hurting one another
We should all stick together
Fighting problems with ease
Not for someone else that we wish to pleaseWe all struggle here and there
But one thing we shouldnt struggle with is fear
We cause that fear on our own
Every step we take and fall something inside us has grown
We shouldnt be afraid to make mistakes
Everyone's heart has to ache
So dont keep things bottled inside like me
It would just make your life has more misery
I have some motivations in my lifetime
But i feel like i have committed so many crimes

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Deathbat73 said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 1:27 pm
Your welcome everyone and thank you for the thoughtful and generous comments.
HoneyBear said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 8:32 pm
Amazing(: Keep Wrighting:)
countrygirl98 said...
Feb. 13, 2011 at 5:13 pm

This is very good! 

Great job!

AthenaBook said...
Feb. 12, 2011 at 9:08 pm
This is absolutly amazing! It really made me think about our choices in life- this was really well thought out. I really enjoyed this.
darkangle56 said...
Feb. 12, 2011 at 4:58 pm
This is amazing! it makes me think. i really injoyed reading it :)
LaShay_25 replied...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 2:48 pm
I love this it made me think about how i shouldn't get down on myself when I fall, thanks for helping me realize that =]
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