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A Young Woman Not Defeated

February 1, 2011
By Tundra12 BRONZE, Blytheville, Arkansas
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Tundra12 BRONZE, Blytheville, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"History will be kind to me for I intend to write it."

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I stood tall even with my head held low
I walked with pride even though I was not proud
I tried to love even though my heart was closed
And spoke with dignity even though I was not loud

I had manners even though I had no self respect
I loved even though I had none I could recall
But now I’m standing up and taking myself back
Because I haven’t been defeated, no not at all

I’m going to walk with my chin up
Stand tall with my head held high
Open my heart and love freely
And speak with not so much as a sigh

I know it’s going to take a lot to get there
And for this I cannot be seated
Because I am and will definitely remain
A young woman not defeated

© Stephanie H., Highland Village, TX

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I wrote this as inspiration to myself.
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narwhal97 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 13 2011 at 7:02 pm
narwhal97 BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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"Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall."

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This is fantastic!  It's so inspiring, it's really beautiful!  Fantastic job.
Tundra12 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 12 2011 at 8:12 pm
Tundra12 BRONZE, Blytheville, Arkansas
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thanks for the comments :) I'm glad it inspired you
XCLover GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2011 at 12:43 pm
XCLover GOLD, Sandpoint, Idaho
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"I know I run like a girl, try and keep up!" ~Anon
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"The hug is incomplete without you :3" NinjaMan

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I found this inspiring as well.

One small critique, I think the last line of the second stanza would flow better if it was "Because I haven't been defeated, not at all" instead of having the "no not at all".

anne.Brooke said...
on Feb. 12 2011 at 9:18 am
anne.Brooke, Mumbai, Other
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wonderful...
Phoenixx GOLD said...
on Feb. 11 2011 at 7:25 pm
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 wish it was this way for all of us. I love the format though, nice work. 5 Stars.
silence-is-loud GOLD said...
on Feb. 11 2011 at 4:13 pm
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this poem reminds me so much of myself... it makes me happy and sad at the same time. I <3 this poem! 5 stars. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Kael96 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2011 at 2:49 pm
Kael96 PLATINUM, Shiloh, New Jersey
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I absolutely love this! Not just an inspiration to you, but an inspiration to all of us.