Summer mind

January 26, 2011
By Lyrics SILVER, Nelson, Other
Lyrics SILVER, Nelson, Other
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Favorite Quote:
You know your in love when you cant fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams ~ Dr.Suess


My sun kissed skin is heated
The August weather is killing
Water hit's my fingers
drenches my every thought.
Roll of the tin
to the green blue liquid
fall in for a second,
I'll drift back up again.
Reflect of the moment
but manage to stay in touch
with the cooling seconds
that never seem long enough
I know it will return
But I'll only live this day once.
Wish i could stay in summer,
wish i could craze forever,
whats not to love?
But one of the best things about fantasy
Is that you still have reality
to fall back on, when nothing works out.
So now I'll maybe fall down, down to the water
But I'll quite my fantasy,
when i want it to be over


The author's comments:
Wrote it in thee.... SUMMMMERRTIME :D

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Lyrics SILVER said...
on Oct. 6 2011 at 12:18 am
Lyrics SILVER, Nelson, Other
7 articles 4 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
You know your in love when you cant fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams ~ Dr.Suess

Ya i agree, ill have to work on that. thanks :)

on Oct. 4 2011 at 3:57 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

Hehe. I like it. The syllabery was metrical. And that last line was perfect. Unfortunately, the only rhythm here comes from the syllables. It couldn't hurt to use some division of feet and alliteration, more like your first line- that one was my favorite. 


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