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Loophole in My Vision

January 16, 2011
By Francisco BRONZE, Hailey, Idaho
Francisco BRONZE, Hailey, Idaho
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I began walking to nowhere.
Rumor said it was a pulchritudinous place.
Not knowing where to start or which way to go,
I started to wander with my eyes closed.
Guided by sensation, I was satisfied.
The ground beneath me felt like marmalade
Concentrated by a thin substance.
As if i was walking on an orange.
Unleashing my vision,
I witnessed road signs making faces at me.
They were unreadable, droop, and complex.
I assumed they belonged to a Dr. Suess book.
Further down the road, I saw chameleon change color;
I was insulted by its lies.
Then I was distracted by my soul,
who I discovered along the way.
He showed me the way to my endpoint.
Such a nice fellow he was.
I ended up at a place called nowhere;
Where the view was quite appealing.
I saw the ocean waving;
Without thought, I waved back.
My countenance grew positive.
I gave an arduous laugh
Realizing that I just got out of my vision.

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