Sweet Sweet Hate

January 25, 2011
By Satyn.Rose SILVER, Oilmont, Montana
Satyn.Rose SILVER, Oilmont, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
"The stars are always there but we miss them in the dirt and clouds. We miss them in the storms. Tell them to remember hope. We have hope." ~Renee Yohe of To Write Love On Her Arms

Before you came along
I was lost
I didn't know what to do with myself
I thought everything would change

I hoped you would love me as much as i loved you
It turned out that isn't what happened
You didn't love me
You insulted me
it seems as if you hated me

You may not have hated me
But it doesn't matter
Nothing matters
I'm over you
There is another man
His name is actually a title
The Angel of Death
He is sweet
Sweet in a way no human could be
There are no insults
No hate

Just one promise that he will go through with
To kill me
He is sweet about it
Promises there will be no pain
That it will be quick

But he says I must be strong
I must do it myself
He will be there to hold my hand
To be with me
To encourage me and guide me
To take care of me
To, in a way, love me

So no matter what I have someone
You can leave
Or you can stay
You can save me
Please save me!

The author's comments:
I would classify this piece under love actually. Only because in my mind this came along with the story that this boy moved to the girl's school and she fell in love with him instantly, only he felt the exact opposite. He hated her. He insulted her. It just wasn't a good situation. So she turned to suicide. She didn't really want to die. Yet she was in love with the angel of death, or the idea of death. But again, she didn't want to die. In the end she realizes that maybe there could be something. She just has to give him one more chance to love her and to help her even more that what the angel of death could help her with.

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