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dust away the ashes
of confusion in my mind,
the clarity breeds calmness
in a heart that tore when blind.
now stitch it back together
with the threads of understanding,
erase the love, but keep the lust,
my body, not my soul, demanding.



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Apeggy said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 6:32 pm
This is a really nice poem. you're a great writer!
 
Nathan.F said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 1:16 am
The clarity breeds calmness
 
Stubbleo77 said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 3:45 pm
I thought it was exceptional. You have such a way with putting true feelings into art. :)
 
PieIsAwkward said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 2:23 pm

This was really good.

In fact, 'twas spectacular in every aspect.

 
HisPurePrincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 11:04 am
i really like it, it's like my writing.  the rhymes are different, no specific rhythm and i like that.
 
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