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ashes of confusion.

January 14, 2011
By Cyann SILVER, Los Alamos, New Mexico
Cyann SILVER, Los Alamos, New Mexico
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new lands but in seeing with new eyes." -Marcel Proust


dust away the ashes
of confusion in my mind,
the clarity breeds calmness
in a heart that tore when blind.
now stitch it back together
with the threads of understanding,
erase the love, but keep the lust,
my body, not my soul, demanding.



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Apeggy BRONZE said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 6:32 pm
Apeggy BRONZE, Albion, New York
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Favorite Quote:
A.B.D"A Beautiful Dream"

This is a really nice poem. you're a great writer!

Nathan.F GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 1:16 am
Nathan.F GOLD, MINNEAPOLIS, Minnesota
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The clarity breeds calmness

on Feb. 8 2011 at 3:45 pm
Stubbleo77 SILVER, Garden City, Michigan
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I thought it was exceptional. You have such a way with putting true feelings into art. :)

on Feb. 8 2011 at 2:23 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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"stap it, rahn"

This was really good.

In fact, 'twas spectacular in every aspect.