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Under the night sky I lay on a blanket and look up at what seems to be a black ink studded with thousands of small tiny diamonds embedded into the blackness. The moon shining bright, filling the night with light. As my eyelids start to close I take one last look of the dark, shiny sky, imprinting it in my head, knowing that this sky won't be here the next night.




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Apeggy said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 6:18 pm:
i Loooove this poem! 5 stars!
 
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HisPurePrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 11:03 am:
i like the way it's phrased, but i'd change it out of paragraph form.  you can't get the full swing of it like that.  
 
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