carve my heart out.

January 14, 2011
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i think that i might carve my heart out today,
keep my feelings locked up somewhere far, far away.
i told you i loved you, and baby, its true,
but with your indecision, what more can i do?
you lift me up with your words and your kiss;
in those perfect moments, my heart is in bliss.
then what? the winds change? because too suddenly,
you're ripping me down into deep misery.
my heart's in your hands and it's being abused,
caressing it gently then beating it bruised.
and still i cry rivers when i think of you gone;
our dusk will set in before we even see dawn.

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tinabeana24 said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 6:26 pm
I love ur poem i feel that i can really relate too it!! :)
poetryguy said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 5:05 pm
Really like it, nice work
SilverSoul said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 12:28 am
I love the last line. This is a very good poem.
Evanescence said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 1:41 pm
Can any words live?
Live anymore than you have made them with this poem?
I don't think so.
I love It! Keep it up! Us poets gotta stick together!
Nelson said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 1:09 pm
I totally love it. I love how you put your emotions in it to make it deep and meaningful. I think you are a great writer and you should keep up the good work. :)
bluejeans428 said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 1:06 pm
Very well done. (:
HisPurePrincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 11:00 am
written almost sloppily, BUT it totally works, because you're saying feelings, and not creating a picture.  it does convey the emotion.  nicely done.  
Jazzluv411 said...
Feb. 8, 2011 at 7:49 am
love love loveee this! i really like it, its nice and sad and short and sweet. good job:)
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