The Window

January 9, 2011
He was satanly in his godliness
He was a fiend angelical
He was dark and pallid
He was dangerous and wonderful
One moment he was hideously low
The next beautiful;
It all depended on if I looked
From the wrong side of the window.

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StrangeJade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 6:25 pm
You are an incredibly talented author. Your words are perfectly chosen and have such a lovely lilt to them. Keep writing! Please? :)
MissFaber replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 1:33 am

Thank you so very much! I especially appreciate your comment because I loved your poetry (& the thing you wrote about HP! <3) and to get such a compliment from a writer who I know writes amazingly means a lot to me. So again, thank you!

I'll never stop writing. And niether should you. ;)

ErisRose said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 10:00 am
This poem is simply amazing! I loved how you wrote it, LOVED IT!!! I'm so jealous of your talent!! :D keep writing!! check out my work if you get a chance:)
MissFaber replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 1:31 am
Thank you! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. Don't be envious, I'm sure your writing is better than mine! I'll be sure to check it out. :)
Ayushi_austen said...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 10:33 am


u write soooooooooooo well..i am envious!!

MissFaber replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 1:30 am
Thank you so much! I so appreciate your kindness :)
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